𝜯𝐞𝐡 𝜝𝐚𝐦𝐬𝐤𝐢@lemmy.world to Comic Strips@lemmy.worldEnglish · 1 year ago[Sea Mask] by thelittleworldoflizi.imgur.comexternal-linkmessage-square6linkfedilinkarrow-up1519arrow-down10
arrow-up1519arrow-down1external-link[Sea Mask] by thelittleworldoflizi.imgur.com𝜯𝐞𝐡 𝜝𝐚𝐦𝐬𝐤𝐢@lemmy.world to Comic Strips@lemmy.worldEnglish · 1 year agomessage-square6linkfedilink
minus-squareMagnyusG@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up6arrow-down2·1 year agoit would’ve been a little funnier if the had dolphin said, “It’s a mask” after being proven wrong
minus-squarePunnyName@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up14arrow-down1·1 year agoShow, don’t tell. The comic works as is.
minus-squareMagnyusG@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up4·1 year agoBoth work, I just feel that admittance would have been more amusing than just being stupefied.
minus-squareMajorMajormajormajor@lemmy.calinkfedilinkarrow-up4·1 year agoI feel it would have been better for the dolphin to say “those are shorts.” after the shark put them on. Better punchline that way.
it would’ve been a little funnier if the had dolphin said, “It’s a mask” after being proven wrong
Show, don’t tell. The comic works as is.
Both work, I just feel that admittance would have been more amusing than just being stupefied.
I feel it would have been better for the dolphin to say “those are shorts.” after the shark put them on. Better punchline that way.
THAT would have been fucking funny!